Talk:Rabbit Keen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 02:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 02:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks really good. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 02:55, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I copyedited the article (easier than writing out all the minor comments) here. Let me know if you disagree with any of the edits.
 * Image is fair use, appropriately tagged and used.
 * and being a member of the relay team in the latter., this wording here is clunky. Maybe just and for the relay team?
 * Dr. Pepper's team in the Capital City League Dr. Pepper as in the drink? Can you link that?
 * The non newspaper references need access-dates.
 * Spot check: 4, 7, 9, 13, 17, 20, 23, 25, 28
 * Ref #4 has a problem with the link. Newspapers.com says it is missing.
 * Keen also holds the record for longest completion in league history by a player who only completed one pass. is a really close paraphrase of the source. Can you reword a bit or just directly quote?
 * That ref #4 issue is very odd - I went to the page and clicked on the clipping, and it said unavailable, and then I made a new clipping myself (see here for my recent clippings), clicked on it, and was told it was unavailable. Maybe including a link like this might work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:19, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all the issues. As for the newspapers.com issue, I put this as the url which I believe still works for those who aren't subscribed to the website. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:13, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * That is really weird. I made my own clipping and it still didn't work. Passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 19:17, 25 August 2023 (UTC)