Talk:Rabbot/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa   (talk)  20:37, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Going to review shortly. Miyagawa  (talk)  20:37, 26 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Lead: No issues.
 * Plot: No issues.

Something I noticed immediately with the references once I got to the Production section is that some references are placed inside the end of sentence punctuation, and some outside. Personally I think that they should be placed following the punctuation points - you just need to pick one way of doing it and make sure all the references are the same.

It is also expected that all questionable points should be cited, with a minimum of a cite at the end of a paragraph - additionally any quotes need to have a citation directly following them.


 * Production: Paragraphs 1, 2 and 4 need citations at the end to cover everything. Paragraph 3 needs a full stop at the end. "This episode does not feature any guest appearances." needs to be merged into another paragraph as its too short to be on its own. "didn't want to air a show about food just going around and doing random stuff" needs a citation directly following it.


 * Stealth pilot: Only the first sentence is cited.


 * Reception: Needs more reviews to be included in order to provide balance.


 * Home release: There's some uncited lines here too.


 * References: All references need to be formatted the same, including data formats. boards.adultswim.com isn't a reliable source.

Given the issues remaining on this article, I'm afraid I'm going to give it another quick fail. Once you've worked through the list above and expanded the Reception section, feel free to resubmit. Miyagawa  (talk)  20:52, 26 March 2011 (UTC)