Talk:Rachel Henderson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)


 * As a youngster --> Not sure about the use of this word. What about just "child"?
 * Changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * As of 2012, she was attending the University of Sydney --> she is attending
 * Changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Article is well written and well sourced. Only other issues in the article would be the same that I pointed out in Talk:Tyan Taylor/GA1 (to not repeat myself).
 * Think this is all addressed. Fewer paragraphs and section headings changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)