Talk:Rachel Ramsey

Encyclopedic tone
Per the editorial comment about encyclopedic tone, I have made some edits to improve the text. I invite others to further edit to improve the article, and if someone feels that the 'encyclopedic tone' box can be removed (as the original writer I feel it is not apropos for me), that would be great. I try to avoid 'puffery' and such, but a re-read shows that I was a bit guilty. Regards Bill McKenna (talk) 16:42, 6 May 2017 (UTC)