Talk:Radagast/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 18:49, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

Happy to discuss, or be challenged on, any of my review comments. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk)
 * Many thanks for taking this on! Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:39, 19 June 2020 (UTC)

Copyvio and Plagiarism check
 * Looked at all sources showing more than 3% match on Earwig's Copyvio Detector. No concerns - nearly all matches were due to titles.
 * Noted.

Lead and Infobox
 * His appearance in The Silmarillion isn't covered in the body of the article.
 * There's hardly anything to say, but I've now said it.
 * Should The Silmarillion be under primary rather than secondary sources?
 * Done.


 * "He features also ..." sounds to me like a phrasing that might be used by a character in the books. Consider "He also features … "
 * Fixed.

Adaptations
 * "and is expanded far beyond the brief role in the book." needs another source.
 * Cited.


 * I couldn't access the Filmonic source link - possibly a temporary issue.
 * Added Archive link.


 * "A worried Radagast watches as Gandalf enters Dol Guldur." doesn't seem to be included in the source cited.
 * Removed.


 * The Hobbit: The Battle of the Five Armies details aren't in the source cited.
 * Cited.

I don't have much to say on this one. The article seems to me to be comprehensive, neutral, and appropriately supported by sources except where there is a little bit to do on the Adaptations section. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:00, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:15, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I'm happy with the responses above. I spotted one other small thing - is "Other" meant to be a subheading under Adaptations (===Other=== rather than ==Other==)?
 * Good catch, demoted. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:47, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for all your work on the article. I'm happy to pass it for GA. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:04, 19 June 2020 (UTC)