Talk:Radio 1 Madonna controversy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:37, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Madonna's single, "Living for Love", → remove both commas here
 * from commercial radio in the UK → from commercial radio in the United Kingdom
 * In response, Madonna fans → In response, the singer's fans (alternation)
 * Unlink "ageism" the second time
 * The single peaked at 26 on the → Commercially, "Living for Love" peaked at number 26 on the

Background

 * during the promotion of the film, Shanghai Surprise → no comma here
 * and 2006 respectively → comma before "respectively"
 * Year in release of "4 Minutes" in brackets
 * defended the station's decision → state "their decision" here for alternation
 * Madonna saying: "I don't think → : to ,
 * For the quote following, fix all ... to [...]
 * George Ergatoudis stated that the channel's audience → state "its audience" here for alternation

Events

 * I think it’s going to be all right to play it," Mac concluded → you have to end this sentence with a full stop
 * A representative for the station explained → One of its representatives explained (alternation)

Reception

 * from Madonna fans → from Madonna's fans
 * for the singer soon spreads to the station's → "spreads" to "spread"
 * Sun, Madonna called the omission → state "she" here for alternation
 * and that ageism was a taboo that is still not being → link "ageism" here to its respective article

BBC rebuttal and aftermath

 * The station listed David Guetta → The station further listed David Guetta
 * For the following quote, fix ... to [...]
 * He stated "[Radio 1 are] → comma after "stated"
 * top-twenty → top 20
 * top-forty → fix to top 40 in both cases

Copy-violation

 * 56.4% is WAY too much! You may want to change something here!

Images

 * Image from lead needs an explanation
 * For the image from "Events", unlink the single's name

Links

 * No problem here! ;)

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:38, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
 * done again! — I B  [ Poke  ] 13:27, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:22, 2 January 2017 (UTC)