Talk:Radioactive (Rita Ora song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after debut studio album
 * Shouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency with the infobox?
 * Mention that it was the fourth single from the album
 * Can't you add anything to the lead about the lyrics of the song?
 * "was met with mixed to positive responses" → "received mixed to positive responses"
 * Shouldn't both certifications use either by or from for consistency?
 * Simply change to premiered rather than bothering to mention it was uploaded to the YouTube channel in the lead
 * Maybe add a mention of critical commentary about Ora's fashion?

Background and composition

 * Again, shouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency?
 * The second and third sentences should be merged, also the release year of Ora is not needed in the body
 * Why does it say multiple remixes including then list out all of the ones in the sources?
 * I do not quite understand the question, what would you suggest? Iaof2017 (talk) 14:57, 8 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Lowercase the Flexican per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * ""Radioactive" is a" → "Musically, "Radioactive" is a"
 * Should electro be piped to Electro (music) instead, possibly?
 * To elaborate on my previous comment, are there not any sources discussing the lyrics?
 * Unfortunately no, it was quite hard to find any source about the song in general. Iaof2017 (talk) 14:52, 8 November 2022 (UTC)

Reception

 * Fix spelling of Rihanna using [] to insert her name in the quote
 * Resolve MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section
 * "As Ora's sixth charting single in the United Kingdom," → "As Ora's sixth charting single in the UK,"
 * Mention that the 200,000 units were sold in the UK

Music video

 * Remove "for "Radioactive"" after accompanying music video
 * "sits in a floating chair" → "spins in a floating chair" per the source
 * [24][28] being invoked in two consecutive sentences is WP:OVERCITE, so only invoke these two after the last one of those and the sentence two later
 * Fine now? Iaof2017 (talk) 14:52, 8 November 2022 (UTC)


 * "we are used to."" → "we are used to"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "used in the video" → "used in the video were"

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this one! --K. Peake 11:23, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, thank you for taking the time to review. I have addressed your comments and left few respondes above. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:01, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, this looks fab and top job on implementing the remixes fix! --K. Peake 18:42, 8 November 2022 (UTC)