Talk:Radioactive contamination from the Rocky Flats Plant/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 11:04, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

Review:
 * 1) "The fire spread to the flammable glove box materials, including plexiglass windows and rubber gloves" These materials caught fire?  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) "HEPA" What is HEPA?  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) "Much more remains interred under the Pad 903 area, which has been paved over with asphalt." Reference?  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) "Krey and Hardy" Who?  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Images all seem to be ok, prose is pretty good and it all seems to be referened pretty good apart from point 3 above.  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)

Replies:
 * 1) Correct. Do you think this should be worded differently?
 * Its fine, was just seeking clarification.  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) ✅ Added a wikilink to HEPA and the expanded initialism to the first occurrence.
 * Looks good.  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) ✅ Done.
 * ✅  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) The authors of the paper referenced at the end of the sentence. I added the word "authors" to the beginning of the sentence to try to make it clearer. Any ideas on how to better present the estimates of the total Pu release would be most welcome.
 * The measurements for Pu release are a bit unwieldy, and might be picked up on if you go to FA, however, they are not a problem here. I can't really think of a better way to phrase it, so leaving as is may be best.  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

I should be able to get to the source added tomorrow. Many thanks for looking at this! VQuakr (talk) 07:34, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok, I think I have addressed anything. I have a couple of questions above, so please let me know in your answers if additional fixes are needed. Thanks again! VQuakr (talk) 04:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Taking final look now!  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:17, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
 * All done, I'll pass the article now, thanks!  ★ ★King∽~Retrolord★ ★  04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)