Talk:Rafael Nadal/GA1

GA Review
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I'm putting this on hold for one week for the following concerns: Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 10:48, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Weasel words in intro: "have led many to regard Nadal".
 * 2) Family and early life section could be expanded. Is there any more info on his family?
 * 3) Not enough info on his early life. It skips right into his interests in tennis. Surely he did something else than play tennis in his early years.
 * 4) 2002-2004 seems too short for a subsection.
 * 5) POV in 2006: "Fierce rivalry".
 * 6) Too many one- and two-sentence paragraphs in 2006, 2007, and 2008 sections.
 * 7) Playing style is largely unsourced; also contains a "currently". Avoid this term, as "currently" can become the past very quickly.
 * 8) Does his natural right handedness need to be mentioned in more than one section?
 * 9) The page could also use a copy edit to tighten up the prose, especially in the 2006, 2007, and 2008 sections.
 * Forget it. I'm pulling the plug after only 3 days because I suck balls. Ten Pound Hammer  and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 16:39, 6 July 2008 (UTC)