Talk:Rahul Thakkar

Grammar problem
I cannot make heads or tails out of the lead paragraph. It needs to be broken up and clarified. It is a run on mess. I don't know what "theater review" is. It needs to be broken up and clarified pr explained. 7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 18:18, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Sure. You have a point. The first sentence itself is excruciatingly long – and the funny thing is, I wrote it (can't imagine why I wrote it like that). Let me try something out. Xender Lourdes (talk) 20:36, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Did something. Tell me if it works for you. Xender Lourdes (talk) 20:56, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
 * It helps. But I would say that it uses technical jargon assumes technical literacy that some of our readers (me for instance) that may not exist.  I am not sure what a "scalable video review system" is.
 * I suggest we drop an explanatory note using the "efn-ua" template. That could include an explanation and then a citation within it. If you don't know how to do that, I can help.  7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 21:04, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅ 7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 04:19, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Name change
Looks like the name Rahul Thakkar was changed to Rahul C. Thakkar. Probably for clearing any ambiguity with other individuals of the same first and last name. Loohar_Thacher (talk) 16:41, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your note; it helps. Please use ~ after your statements to sign your messages, otherwise it becomes hard to understand who has left the message. I used to make the same mistake early on (which is like just two months ago; I am also new here on Wikipedia) but learnt that signing is easy and helpful. To mention again, just write the four tildes after your statements, and the signature appears automatically. WP:Signatures has more information. For now, I have copied and pasted your name after your statement so others know you have left the message.


 * On your note, thank you again, I will include the middle name as it is now referenced. Like this assistance, do try and contribute wherever you think is possible. Do you remember the note you had left earlier about another guy called Leon also winning the Oscar (it's just referenced above)? With your inputs, I made a new article on the other guy and nominated it as a good article. You can read up on the person at Cottalango Leon. Both these articles – Rahul Thakkar and Cottalango Leon – may appear on the Main front page of Wikipedia some time. I shall keep you updated but do keep a track. Quite interesting. Xender Lourdes (talk) 02:07, 12 February 2016 (UTC)

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particular referencing system is used over the article? &#x222F; WBG converse 14:32, 9 May 2019 (UTC)