Talk:Raid (boating)

Can someone clarify, for the benefit of this Wikipedia relative newbie (~4 months), what are the problems with the page "Raid - A sail and oar adventure", and how might they be resolved? I.e. why is it annotated “ ….multiple issues”, “… insufficient context”, “… needs more links”, etc? Perceiving the page from the perspective of a fairly frequent “Raider”, I can see little reason to criticise it. Given suitable clarification and guidance, I would be pleased to lend my “Raiding” experience to help improve the page. Pwat (talk) 14:57, 7 May 2012 (UTC)