Talk:Raining Men (Rihanna song)/GA1


 * The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 01:15, 31 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * Add a reference in the article that supports the year the song was recorded
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Reference 6 says that the label is Def Jam/IDJMG
 * What do you want me to do?! Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Add a reference in article that supports who wrote and produced the song
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * I am not sure if there is artwork, but since it is a single.
 * Artwork was never released, if any.


 * Lead
 * "The song was solicited to urban radio on December 7, 2010, as the third United States single." – "as the third United States single" needs to be "as the third single from Loud"
 * ✅ It was a US only single, not international, that's why US is there. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!


 * Background and release
 * Double quotes (") need to be around both indented quotes
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * "...she continued, with a giggle." – Remove this because this was not part of what she said
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!


 * Critical reception
 * "August Brown of theLos Angeles Times said..." – Add space between "the" and "Los"
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!


 * Charts
 * No issues


 * References
 * Reference 3 & 4 – "Viacom" not needed as publisher
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Reference 6 – Publisher is Radio & Records
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Reference 7 – Publisher is The New York Times Company
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Reference 16 – Add "language=" parameter and put "Dutch"
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!

Overall review
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold at this time. Here are the two main issues keeping this article from good article status:
 * Citation of reliable sources where necessary: There are some spots where specific facts aren't supported by a reference in the article.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Major aspects: I think this article can be expanded a bit. Here is what you can do with it:
 * – Since there is a little information on this song, rename the "Critical reception" section to the "Composition and critical reception" section where critics could describe the song while still reviewing it. Also, if possible, try an add an audio sample (this is not required for GA status, but it adds better clarity to the article).
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * – Put in a "Credits and personnel" section in to support the claims in the infobox about the writers and producers of the song.
 * ✅, but it's not very big though. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * – I have researched this song and found information about a music video. Add a music video section in this article with informaton like release date, producer(s), film location, and synopsis.
 * Really? That's news to me. I can't find anything. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!

I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or debate the items you believe do not affect good article status. Please indicate on each issue when you have addressed it by using the ' or ' template. If you have any questions or need help with something, please feel free to ask. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 05:41, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Done/Answered all. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  11:58, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep expanding this article if information becomes available. Congratulations and keep up the good work! - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:48, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks!! Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  18:59, 1 August 2011 (UTC)


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