Talk:Rainivoninahitriniony/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 17:01, 12 August 2015 (UTC)

Many issues, some listed below: --Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:01, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
 * First two sections Unreferenced.
 * Last fact needs a citation
 * Paragraph in lead should be split
 * Instead of mentioning his name in the article, just use "he".
 * Add isbns or oclcs to the first two sources.
 * More sources?
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thanks for reviewing this. I hope to get to these changes today. - Lemurbaby (talk) 10:58, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Apologies, real life took over. I've been away from home for a work related training. I should have time for getting these done on Sunday 8/23. Thanks for your patience. - Lemurbaby (talk) 11:08, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Are you OK with me failing this for now until you get some time to work on it later? After that you can resubmit it for another review, and I'll come right back and pick it up.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:10, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Tomandjerry211 (alt), Lemurbaby hasn't edited on Wikipedia since the above post from August 22, now three weeks ago. It's probably time for you to fail it; Lemurbaby can always renominate after returning and addressing the issues you raised above. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:18, 12 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thanks for reviewing this. I hope to get to these changes today. - Lemurbaby (talk) 10:58, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Apologies, real life took over. I've been away from home for a work related training. I should have time for getting these done on Sunday 8/23. Thanks for your patience. - Lemurbaby (talk) 11:08, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Are you OK with me failing this for now until you get some time to work on it later? After that you can resubmit it for another review, and I'll come right back and pick it up.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:10, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Tomandjerry211 (alt), Lemurbaby hasn't edited on Wikipedia since the above post from August 22, now three weeks ago. It's probably time for you to fail it; Lemurbaby can always renominate after returning and addressing the issues you raised above. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:18, 12 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Tomandjerry211 (alt), Lemurbaby hasn't edited on Wikipedia since the above post from August 22, now three weeks ago. It's probably time for you to fail it; Lemurbaby can always renominate after returning and addressing the issues you raised above. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:18, 12 September 2015 (UTC)