Talk:Rajendra Srivastava

Inappropriate tone
As requested on my talk page, here are some reasons that I tagged the article for inappropriate tone: – Fayenatic  L ondon 10:41, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Use of personal rather than family name. ✅
 * "He comes with an experience of over 40 years as…" this phrase fits a CV, e.g. where he is seeking to "come" to a new appointment – not an objective article about him.
 * Promotional language e.g. "prestigious", "distinguished", "highly cited" – such phrases could only be acceptable if specifically cited
 * "He has led…", "He is a strong advocate for…", "Srivastava is committed to…", "He has championed…", "This interest is also reflected in his work…" – these all belong in a CV rather than an article, unless specifically cited.

Conflict of interest
I have added a "Connected contributor" template above for, who has expanded this article by a factor of 3. She has a WP:Conflict of interest as she is Digital Media Manager at the Indian School of Business and updating this article on advice from the Dean's (Rajendra Srivastava's) office.

please move the existing references into inline citations using tags. It will be OK for you to do this yourself.

You may also tone down the promotional language, or remove info that is not supported by citations, without first checking such edits with independent editors. – Fayenatic  L ondon 19:43, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Template-protected edit request on 28 October 2020
Hi Team, I have made the required iterations, request you to help in removing the message on the Rajendra Srivastava's Wiki page. Or please suggest on the further modifications. I am advised to update the page. As I have emphasized earlier, the information posted on the page is factual.

Sireesha EV (talk) 06:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
 * The article's tone is still far too promotional, the article should be trimmed by half. This reads like a profile on his university's page. As an example, you would not see in Britannica. – Thjarkur (talk) 10:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)