Talk:Rajinikanth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:38, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:38, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found with the article.
 * There are five disambiguation links and there is one deadlink in the references  that need to be addressed.
 * The three film images in the article fail our non-free criteria and should be removed/deleted.
 * A lot of the refs are bare urls; for these, titles, access dates, publishers, etc. need to be added. Others may have only one or two of the required fields, and should have more filled in as well.
 * I'm not sure about the reliability of some of these sources. Ref #60, for example, should not be used as blogs are not a reliable source.
 * "He attended the Acharya Patasala for elementary education and had his higher education at the Ramakrishna Mission in Bangalore." should be cited
 * "and also financially supported him for 2 years during his studies" write out single digit numbers (two)
 * The Breakthrough section has no cites, and neither does the first rise to stardom para
 * "Be it the sadistic husband of Sujatha in Avargal or the wolf in sheep's clothing in Moondru Mudichu or the lust-filled village rowdy in Bharathiraja's 16 Vayadhinile, he did with so much perfection." these types of sentences need to be cut from the article; not encyclopedic in the slightest.
 * While the prose isn't too bad, a copyedit for tone and tweaking would be beneficial.

Because of how major some of the issues I found are, I don't think they can could realistically be handled well within the hold period, and as a result I have to fail this article now. Should the issues above be dealt with, it can always be re-nominated at GAN. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:51, 3 March 2011 (UTC)