Talk:Rakta Sambandham/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 12:16, 30 December 2019 (UTC)

I will review this soon, thanks. Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:16, 30 December 2019 (UTC)

My apology for this late response. I will finish it right now. Yashthepunisher (talk) 19:48, 8 February 2020 (UTC)

Lead
 * Comments
 * I think the director should be mentioned first in the opening sentence and then the producers.
 * Done


 * "Radha falls in love with Raju's friend Anand, and they get married." Lose the oxford comma. Not consistent with others.
 * Done


 * Is their any info on the budget?
 * No. They said that it was produced on a restricted budget. No other reliable sources found.


 * "who praised the performances of the film's cast." I feel 'the film's' is unnecessary here.
 * Done


 * The word 'film' is mentioned twice in a single sentence in the third para.
 * Made amends accordingly.

Cast
 * The whole male female cast divide seems redundant.
 * Agreed. But both the film's credits and the songbook mention the listing in the same way. I did not know whom to prioritize over whom while making a singular list. Hence i went with the flow.

Production
 * Link Tamil and Telugu language in their first mention.
 * Done


 * "but were skeptical of the film's success, as it had a very tragic script." The word 'script' would have suited if the script had never materialised into a film. 'Story' would be a better choice of word here.
 * Makes more sense this way. Amended accordingly.


 * "Relangi and Girija were chosen to play Apparao and Sita." Add 'respectively' here.
 * Done

Music
 * "He was initially apprehensive about the songs as all of them were situation based, and that Viswanathan's music received critical acclaim." Forgive me, but who is Viswanathan here?
 * He is the music director of the Tamil original film. It was already mentioned in the "Cast and crew" section.


 * "penned the lyrics" is very idiomatic. Kindly rephrase.
 * Changed to collaborated.

Release, reception and legacy
 * "Rakta Sambandham made a great impact on the on-screen image of Rama Rao and Savitri." The word 'great' is very pov-ish and non-neutral.
 * Done changed to significant.

Thank you for your patience. Yashthepunisher (talk) 19:48, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Waiting for your response. Yashthepunisher (talk) 07:02, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Sorry. Was out of town for weeks, and hence could not notice this happening. I have worked on all the suggestions above. Feel free to suggest further which you feel necessary. Veera Narayana 04:52, 3 March 2020 (UTC)