Talk:Ramji H. Kamani

Reassessment comment
Biographical articles should not be in list form and use encyclopedic language ("dies" instead of "breathes his last"). I removed the table because it looks like a mere translation of a list provided by the Kamani Foundation, which would make it a copyright violation. Another citation directs to a Wiki article, but Wikipedia is not a reliable source, so that citation should be replaced. Images should not be used as in-text explanations. Please check against some featured articles to get inspiration on how to structure a biographical article more efficiently. Regards Hekerui (talk) 19:49, 22 December 2011 (UTC)