Talk:Ramona (1910 film)

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 07:47, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Jesse Graziano (aka User:JayGraz)'s peer review
1. You do not need to put the title in bold letters after it's used once. You used this method at the beginning of the "Plot" section, however just a simple italicization is appropriate enough. 2. The parentheses that say (dir. "insert director here") looks highly unofficial in Wiki terms. 3. You could add descriptions for each actor/actress and their character. A strong example of this is included here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars%3A_The_Force_Awakens#Cast

Honestly, other than these three flaws, I think it would come out almost perfectly when finished and would grab a lot of readers' attentions! — Preceding unsigned comment added by JayGraz (talk • contribs) 02:33, 23 December 2016 (UTC)