Talk:Rancho Tehama shootings/Archive 1

Please add encyclopedic content
Hi,. Many other Wikipedia pages have links such as 'Kevin Janson Neal' that parachute into the 'perpetrator' section of this article. The very first words are 'Kevin Janson Neal', so there is no astonishment - and no cogent reason to bold his name. Generally, per MOS:BOLD and WP:R such bolding is reserved for the lead section, unless there is an astonishment issue - which there is not. Read 'WP:R#PLA' carefully. The operative word is 'astonishment'.

Additionally, you seem to delete content without making an effort to improve it, or improve the citations. If you dig around, and do some research, you can build out the article, instead of nibbling away at it. Nibbling is good, if you make three steps ahead and one step back, but it is not good to continually make one step back.

Let's work together on this. We all bring something to the table.Thank you for your participation and collaboration. Having fun! Cheers! 13:42, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Disagreement over legality of gun possession
Interesting that these two sources seem to disagree on question of gun ownership.

"The court records show a judge ordering Neal to stay away from the woman who was stabbed and her mother-in-law on Feb. 28. As part of that protective order, Neal was barred from having guns." http://www.chron.com/news/crime/article/The-Latest-Northern-California-gunman-s-wife-12359798.php

"Assistant Sheriff Phil Johnston said... Neal was not prohibited from buying guns" http://www.kcra.com/article/6-dead-incl-gunman-9-injured-in-tehama-county-shooting-rampage/13600667 130.36.63.145 (talk) 22:14, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Injuries
There needs to be some consistency in counting the injured. The attack infobox gives 18 injuries, the casualties list gives 13 and the criminal infobox gives 12. WWGB (talk) 12:49, 18 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, . I totally agree about continuity. To that end, I aligned the main infobox and the criminal infobox to be 18. I do not know what to do about the casualties list. Before there was a separation of direct injured (12 by bullets) and indirect injured (6 by flying glass). I really do not see the need for a distinction, except in a narrative. Having fun! Cheers!   04:52, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, . I tweaked the casualties list. Please re-tweak if needed. Having fun! Cheers!  05:56, 22 November 2017 (UTC)

Adding "County" to infobox title. Suggestion
Hello, Rancho Tehama County Reserve shootings seems very awkward. Is there another way to introduce Tehama County to the infobox? Otherwise, great work. Fettlemap (talk) 00:19, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Rancho Tehama Reserve is a community within Tehama County. It is not appropriate to blur the distinction. WWGB (talk) 00:27, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, . It was a typo. Good catch. Having fun! Cheers!  02:47, 23 November 2017 (UTC)