Talk:Rancho Tehama shootings/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 19:45, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Review
Will review. Stay tuned! MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 19:45, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Criteria

 * Style – Exceptional.
 * Verifiability – No issues here. Sources are reliable and everything is cited inline.
 * Neutrality – Very neutral in tone.
 * Stability – No large updates in recent months.
 * Illustration – Images found and licensed correctly.
 * Copyright – All good here, too.

Lead

 * – Where does it mention international debates in the body paragraphs?

Infobox

 * – I know it's "obvious", but this isn't cited anywhere in the body paragraphs. To be included here, it needs a ref elsewhere per WP:INFOBOXCITE.

Shootings

 * – I made a change here. Please check it.
 * – No need to cluster so many sources here. One or two is fine. Consider removing the citekill.
 * – I like this here. I would say you should remove "The 25-minute" mention before so it doesn't seem redundant.

Victims

 * – Same here with the citekill. Consider merging or trimming.


 * – Is there mention in the source or in others about how much money they were able to gather?

Perpetrator

 * – The body paragraphs say he was raised in Cary, not born there. Please make sure it's one or the other.

Location

 * A bit too detailed and may not require a section in itself. I think the distances to other cities/towns may not be too relevant for this article. You already mentioned it is a rural and isolated community. Perhaps you can add the as a footnote. What are your thoughts on that?

Aftermath

 * – Why was there widespread criticism? Can you expand on this?

Decision: fail

 * No response in over 7 days. Article fails GA. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 17:43, 30 September 2019 (UTC)