Talk:Randall Scotting

To do
I have completed the AfC review and accepted this article. A good start has been made here, but there are a few things to do. Can we get some more dates into the head, including a date of birth, unless this information is really not in the public sphere? An infobox would be good, as would a photo - contact his agents and ask if they have a publicity photo that has been released under a free licence. The lead at the top is very repetitive and boring, with every sentence following the same structure: try to make the writing more interesting. Don't use direct external links in the text itself: these links can of course be put into footnotes. A couple of the links I clicked on were dead, by the way. Keep looking for more sources: I'd love to see a reference to an interview with him or profile of him in a major newspaper, for example. Keep up the good work! Doric Loon (talk) 10:56, 2 September 2022 (UTC)