Talk:Randy Rhoads/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MisterCake (talk · contribs) 21:49, 14 October 2020 (UTC)


 * " DuBrow was an L.A. photographer who was not at all what Rhoads had in mind for his new band, and he was not well liked by his Quiet Riot bandmates, a situation that caused a great deal of tension within the band." A bit confusing, as he's not in the band yet, and "not at all" may get into editorializing.
 * Surely more to say about Mr. Crowley and Crazy Train. Also nice if explain the relevance of Ozzy's quote.
 * Nothing to cite from McIver or Rosens books?
 * Footnote 25 needs page numbers.
 * "Sarzo, Rudy (2017). Off the Rails " appears to be self published. If so, that cant be used. One should find alternative sources for those claims, and put the book in a further reading section
 * Nice to archive every source you can.

Status query
MisterCake, I note that SolarFlash, who nominated the article, has not edited on Wikipedia since August 29, over three months ago and before you opened this review. The vast majority of the clean-up work on the article since the review opened has been done by you. Are you planning on continuing working on the article until you think it's ready to pass? If so, it would be a good idea to get a second opinion before you pass it, to be sure you haven't overlooked anything—it's easier to miss issues with your own edits or revised prose than it is in someone else's wording. Thanks for all the work you've done so far! BlueMoonset (talk) 05:46, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes, I probably have to fail it soon. No, I wasn't planning on doing all the work to fix it to GA status - would have to find sources where it uses youtube, etc, that I'm not prepared to do. But I did try to improve it. Cake  (talk) 08:20, 2 December 2020 (UTC)