Talk:Randy Ruiz/GA1

GA Review
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 * Comments
 * and has currently been playing for about two months in Major League Baseball in his career so far.
 * -->and has been playing in Major League Baseball for about two months.


 * ✅ -- RyRy  ( talk ) 18:36, 4 October 2008 (UTC)


 * The lead says he played eight baseball seasons with Minor League Baseball. The first paragraph of Minor League career says nine baseball seasons


 * -- RyRy  ( talk ) 18:36, 4 October 2008 (UTC)


 * In 1999, he was signed to the Cincinnati Reds organization as a non-drafted free agent on July 11, and made his professional debut playing in 33 games with the Gulf Coast Reds and two games with the Single-A Clinton LumberKings. --> Say "On July 11, 1999" Split sentences because right now it's a run-on.


 * ✅ -- RyRy  ( talk ) 18:36, 4 October 2008 (UTC)


 * He ranked fourth in hits with 88 with 88 what? tissues? notebooks? children?
 * -- RyRy  ( talk ) 18:36, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

More coming later.  iMa tth ew (talk) 00:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Actually, the rest of it looks perfectly fine, I'm going to pass this, good job!  iMa tth ew (talk) 19:46, 9 October 2008 (UTC)