Talk:Rania Stephan

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Suggestions
Great article! A couple suggestions: In the sentence "Stephan worked as a camera person, a film editor, a sound engineer", I would recommend writing "a film editor AND a sound engineer". There is a mistake in the phrase " Stephan took the streets and met people". It should be "Stephan took TO the streets and met people". In the phrase "The Film is composed entirely of VHS footage", "Film" should not be capitalized. Also, I would recommend maybe putting the links to the IMDB articles on the movies you mention, if they have them. All around great article, good job! Clark Cant (talk) 12:41, 23 March 2016 (UTC)