Talk:Rasa von Werder

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I would appreciate all and any comments, criticisms please of my article about Kellie as I wish it to meet all the standards of Wikipedia and to ensure the article is of the highest quality and am happy to make any edits to facilitate this. I thank you for your help. Michkr1 15:25, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

Rating
Needs attention to references &c before Start rating applies.--Felix Folio Secundus (talk) 12:45, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

The references are all published, so what's the problem? She is influential in Femdom religious circles, yet alive, and so few biographies have been written yet. Not her fault. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.224.60.179 (talk) 22:56, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

References, and clarification on dates
I've toned down some of the language in here, and am now trying to improve the references. There are a lot of references to what seem to be titles from press clippings (without page numbers), which don't appear in GNEWS, so I'm hunting for other archived sources to WP:VERIFY a lot of unreferenced or poorly referenced claims made here per WP:BLP. One problem I've run into is with the date of her religious conversion: If anyone can get hold of a full copy of her book, there may be clarification there of the timeline. Dai Pritchard (talk) 14:30, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
 * the 1999 Salon article says she had an initial religous vision in 1978
 * a June 1978 press article says "Everts says God told her last July to quit her job as a social worker and enter the strip business."
 * In her book there's a magazine cover image dated 1975, with the headline "Hot-Gospel Stripper Finds It Cool In Britain"

External links modified
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I have just added archive links to 1 one external link on Rasa von Werder. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080810012851/http://www.kinky-kellie.com:80/ to http://www.kinky-kellie.com/

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A Commons file used on this page has been nominated for speedy deletion
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 * The cover of Rasa's book "I Strip ForGod".tif

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 * Kellie Everts, progenitor of female body-building.jpg
 * Kellie Everts.jpg

Wikilinks are not citations, nor are bare urls
you are continuing to mark your edits things like "adding inline citations" when all you are doing is wikifying a word or name of a publication. Similarly, bare urls are not the format for inline citations, either. In the AfD I gave you the link for how to WP:CITE sources. You need to use Wikipedia formatting for actual inline citations or these are not really improvements. - CorbieVreccan  ☊ ☼ 18:45, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Morton Downey Jr
She went the Uk, where she appeared on (the US based Morton Downey Jr show).

this doesn’t make sense 94.196.57.81 (talk) 20:16, 26 May 2024 (UTC)