Talk:Rascals (Star Trek: The Next Generation)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

I will review this. MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * no dab links

Plot

 * "they use comm badges" - communication badges
 * "With command function enabled," - With the command function enabled,
 * "After the events, transporter is used to return Picard," - After the events, the transporter is used to return Picard,

Writing

 * The wikilink for DNA should be on the first instance it is mentioned not the second

Direction and casting

 * Remove the duplicate link for Rick Berman

Broadcast

 * "This was part of an overall decline in ratings during the first part of the sixth season, the preceeding episode," - replace the first comma with a semi-colon
 * "received a rating of 13.4 percent" - sentence lacks a full stop

Critical reception

 * "Handlen said that the Miles/Keiko scene was "dramatically interesting", and said that the part of the episode with the Ferengi was "a nice mini-action movie that helps pick up a generally dodgy hour"." - reptition of the word "said"
 * "He said that it resembled the Star Trek: The Animated Series episode "The Counter-Clock Incident", and said that the first act of "Rascals" was compelling." - same issue as above