Talk:Rattlesnake Fire (2018)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:04, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * That should be all; short but sweet! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks,  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 02:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * All done. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:50, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 05:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go.

Files

 * : relevant, high quality and copyright free—valid public domain rationale.

Prose

 * "Around 1:30 PM (Mountain Time)" – standard time or DST?
 * MST; Arizona does not observe daylight savings time. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * "The fire expanded onto the San Carlos Indian Reservation" – should it not be into?
 * Probably not, but I've made this changed for consistency. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * "progress on April 22 thanks to improved weather" – change to "progress on April 22 due to improved weather" or something similar.
 * ✅ – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * "which grew over the next day to 21,513 acres (8,706 ha)." – recommend "which grew to over 21,513 acres (8,706 ha) the next day."
 * ✅ – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * "No definite cause was determined, however." – recommend "However, no definite cause could be determined."
 * I have removed the "however" instead. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Refs
Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 3, 6, 8, 14, 16 or 22.
 * All of the refs have archive URL parameters aside from those from The Arizona Republic; is there a reason for this?
 * The Arizona Republic has been manually excluded from the Wayback Machine. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Oh I see! A shame.


 * Ref 13 is missing a date.
 * Good catch. Fixed now. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * For ref 22, I would recommend mentioning the Ecological Restoration Institute.
 * They're part of Northern Arizona University, so I'll pass on this. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠  04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Noted.

Other
Infobox, coords, nav, cats, WP:ALT text and other templates good.