Talk:Raul Pizarro

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Your introduction sentence is clear and concise, which I appreciate. Within your early life and education section, consider specifying what type of paint Pizarro uses.

I'm not sure how you got the information that you did from the "Exhibits & Events" article because it doesn't include text about your artist, to my understanding. I'd make sure that the information you got from your introduction sentence matches up with the article you referenced.

Make sure to include a bibliography section where you explain whether or not your works that are cited are credible and why they are credible.

Ex: “Abdullah Qureshi.” Residency Unlimited, http://residencyunlimited.org/residencies/abdullah-qureshi/.

This is an article published by Residency Unlimited, which is an arts organization in Brooklyn, New York, so it should be a reliable source. This article is helpful in establishing notability because it provides information about the artists educational background, bio, and statement about the art he creates

As for whether or not you've inserted reliable sources, to my understanding you have because you've inserted articles from organizations such as Latino USA, the Daily Bulletin, and OUT Write.

Since this is a bibliography about Raul Pizarro as an artist, I'd make sure to insert additional information about his artistic style and how he approaches art.

Leilachabane (talk) 21:56, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Leila Chabane

I'd also make sure to insert when this artist was born to provide more detail about their background, if this is possible for you to find. Leilachabane (talk) 21:58, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Leilachabane

Hello!

Your article is amazing and I think it is basically ready to be moved to publication. If I had to say anything constructive about it, I'd suggest including a Further Reading and/or External Links section for any informal sources you found. As long as you don't use these sources in the main body of your article I think you will be okay. That way users can really get a scope of who your artist is. Other than that, great job! NerdyAlo (talk) 01:12, 24 February 2022 (UTC)AlondraSantana (talk) 15:56, 22 February 2022 (UTC)AlondraSantana