Talk:Ravi Vadlamani

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Hello fellow wikipedians, I have done enough changes and also gave more citations to the article. So the tags can be removed, please help me in this regard. Thanking you Nagsail (talk) 00:56, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I still feel this reads like an advert and the personal resume of Ravi. Much of the content is puffery for example:
 * "Ravi could prevail upon the global corporation GE the need to construct 30 school buildings in Nizampatnam area under their Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) initiative. Project HEAL (Health for All), a Rotary program, was leveraged to distribute more than 5,000 tricycles to the physically-challenged persons, help organise 10,000 cataract operations, provide medical equipment and ambulances to hospitals. Under the Home for Humanity, more than 500 houses, and over 3,000 toilets were constructed."
 * The above paragraph is about a project and mentions Ravi as only in the opening sentence. The rest is about the project and nothing to do with him personally. The whole page needs toned down but that's just my opinion. We can see what other editors say. --CNMall41 (talk) 06:14, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

Hi,
I have made enough changes in the page and also provided citations as many as possible. Can anyone help in removing the tags mentioned. Thank you Nagsail (talk) 11:56, 14 January 2019 (UTC)