Talk:Ray Brown – Rock clothing fashion designer

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I placed the three tags on this article. The writing style is good, and it's pretty clear. However, it does not cite it's sources as required, it also reads like a promotion, violating wiki's rule on NPOV. I realize I can edit the article as well, however, out of respect to the original poster, I want to allow you the time to make the requested changes. Thanks! KoshVorlon  ".. We are ALL Kosh..."  18:59, 3 October 2007 (UTC)