Talk:Ray Murphy Jr.

Tone
This article strikes me as being written more like an essay than an encyclopedia entry. While Murphy was no doubt an amazing human being, we must strive to be impartial. Some claims need to be sourced, like his status as an Olympic hopeful and how important he was in developing sip and puff technology, which will also help with the tone. --Danger (talk) 19:45, 1 September 2010 (UTC)