Talk:Ray O'Connor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the detailed review. I've addressed everything :) Steelkamp (talk) 15:29, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * G'day, just one last thing which seems to be hanging "He believed that more" is an unfinished sentence in the Early political career section. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 22:37, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * True, that has been removed. Steelkamp (talk) 02:39, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
 * OK, passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:43, 5 August 2023 (UTC)