Talk:Raymond Leane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 22:52, 23 August 2017 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons&mdash;science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Some comments; see below
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Some comments; see below
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Some comments; see below
 * Some comments; see below

Looks good. Hawkeye7  (talk)  22:52, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * Link the 45th, 47th and 49th Battalions
 * Link Ronald Hopkins
 * Give Major Allen's full name, and link to his article
 * 12th Brigade is linked twice in the lead
 * Suggest adding the Australian Generals of World War I navbox
 * 2nd Division is linked twice in the body
 * G'day . Thanks very much for the review. All done. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:53, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Okay. Passing now.  Hawkeye7   (talk)  00:20, 24 August 2017 (UTC)