Talk:Re Umberto-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:52, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * External links good.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * Move boilers to the power parameter.
 * Done, and linked
 * Abbreviate Elswick Ordnance Company in the infobox
 * Done
 * Link and abbreviate nautical miles in the infobox
 * Done
 * Sardegna, the first use of triple-expansion steam engines. Clarify that she had the first TE engines used by an Italian warship in the lede.
 * Good point
 * Link fire support, floating battery, naval minister
 * Done the first two, but I don't think we have one for Italy (there are articles for France, Germany, Russia, among others, but not Italy)
 * Kind of a wall-of-text with the dimensions; I prefer to give a single range and not sweat which ship was the longest, etc.
 * A fair point - see how I've rewritten it.
 * Don't think we really need displacement in short tons.
 * Fine with me.
 * Be consistent about units for displacement between infobox and main body.
 * Fixed
 * Watch your rounding errors in the main body.
 * Should be fixed now.
 * The ships were lightly armored for her size typo--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:48, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Good catch. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 12:23, 29 October 2015 (UTC)