Talk:Real Chemistry/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 01:03, 24 September 2016 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly, ideally sometime this weekend. (it's a fairly short article so i don't have an excuse if it gets too delayed) Wizardman  01:03, 24 September 2016 (UTC)

Here's what I found:
 * Technically, if the image is fair use the file size should be a good deal smaller... but I'm actually quite positive it falls under public domain due to the Threshold of originality (though I imagine it's probably trademarked). Re-tag the image as such. (the other articles you have at GAN may fall under that as well, but it's a tougher call in those cases)
 * " Jim Weiss, as a " rm comma splice
 * "led to a series of layoffs.[4][4]" you cite the same ref twice; not sure if intentional or is there was a different ref you meant to cite.
 * While not an issue currently, the way this is written the article does have the potential to become dated relatively quickly. Granted as long as you keep an eye on it you should be fine.

I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman 20:48, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I see the issues are fixed now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman  13:57, 2 October 2016 (UTC)