Talk:Real Friends (Camila Cabello song)/GA2

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:39, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

Lead
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 * It was written by Cabello, William Walsh, Louis Bell, Brian Lee and its producer Frank Dukes. It was released as a promotional single along with "Never Be the Same" on December 7, 2017 an instant gratification track to accompany the digital pre-orders of the album. → Written by Cabello, William Walsh, Louis Bell, Brian Lee and its producer Frank Dukes, it was released as a promotional single on December 7, 2017 to accompany the digital pre-orders of the record. (to avoid repetition of words; you don't need that much detail on the release in the lead)
 * "Real Friends" is musically soft with an acoustic guitar as its foundation, it finds Cabello reflecting about her life while asking for an honest friendship. → "Real Friends" has been musically described as soft, with an acoustic guitar used as its foundation. Its lyrics find Cabello reflecting about her life while asking for an honest friendship.
 * Its calm production draws from reggae and Latin and tropical music genres. → The song's minimalistic production draws elements from reggae, Latin and tropical music genres.
 * of the Los Angeles City → "City" is superfluous
 * in which Cabello felt annoyed about when she was finishing the recording sessions for the album → which Cabello felt annoyed about when she was finishing the recording sessions for the album there
 * group Fifth Harmony. However, Cabello denied these → group Fifth Harmony; Cabello denied these
 * who complimented the soft acoustic sound in which it was built around while praised the performer's vocals → who complimented its soft acoustic sound and Cabello's vocals

Infobox

 * I don't see "Acoustic-pop" to be cited anywhere in the article's body, so that needs to be removed

Background and release
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 * and Brian Lee while production was handled by Dukes himself → and Brian Lee, while production was solely handled by Dukes
 * finishing her solo debut album, Camila (2018) unsatisfied with the city, and its industrialist environment → finishing her solo debut album, Camila (2018). Unsatisfied with the city and its industrialist environment,...
 * This unconformity, made Cabelo wonders how "tired" she was at that moment, inspiring her to create a song which she could express her thoughts and emotions, giving life to "Real Friends" through its chorus. → Please remove this whole sentence, as it is kind of the same information as in the prior sentence
 * The last song created for the album, "Real Friends" was at → The last song created for the album, "Real Friends" was recorded at
 * in Virginia Beach, Virginia, by Serban → remove second comma
 * Image > in the district of Hollywood → we can't find this information in the article's body
 * Image > when she was annoyed about the city's industrialist environment and "small things" that was happening in her life. → when she was annoyed about the city's industrialist environment and reflected about her life.

Composition and lyrics
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 * and additionally, a lone handclap → and a lone handclap
 * In contrast to the song's soft melody, the verses are sung calmly → How is "soft" a contrast to "calmly"?
 * Cabello using low register → Cabello using her low register
 * while vulnerably asks → while vulnerably asking
 * It's most evident during chorus, in which she sings → Lyrics from the chorus include: (it's very much of your own opinion when you say "it's most evident")
 * Its sound also exhibits influences of tropical, reggae and Latin music.[11][12][13] It has a length of three minutes and thirty-three seconds. → Having a length of three minutes and 33 seconds, its sound also exhibits influences of tropical, reggae and Latin music.[11][12][13]

Reception
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 * Sam Warner from Digital Spy is an example, he said → Sam Warner from Digital Spy wrote (you don't need the "is an example part")
 * Alex Petridis analyzed the lyrics saying that sounds like it’s dealing with → Similarly, Alex Petridis analyzed the lyrics, speculating that they discuss on
 * affirmating → affirming
 * the song does not refers → the song was not referring
 * well received → well-received
 * music journalists → music critics
 * described it as most sparest in comparison to her previously released tracks. → described it as Cabello's most sparest song in comparison to her past work.
 * For Variety's Staff → Accordin to Variety's staff
 * acoustic ballad "All These Years" describing them as "stunning" → acoustic ballad "All These Years" describing them as "stunning",
 * track "Consequences" writing that both "pretty" ballads showcase her vocals → track "Consequences" writing that both as "pretty" ballads that showcase her vocals
 * due to positive digital downloads → digital downloads can't be positive; remove "positive"
 * It debuted at top hundred in Canada → It debuted within the top 100 in Canada
 * it reached top forty in several other → it reached the top 40 in several other regions
 * six on Bubbling Under Hot 100– a component that lists → six on the Bubbling Under Hot 100, a component chart that lists

Credits and personnel
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 * The following credits were adapted from the liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes
 * Link the locations in "Recording"

Charts

 * All seems on point here ;)

Copy-violation

 * 91.6% is WAY too heavy! It seems like your text is very similar to that on camilacabello.wikia.com/wiki/Real_Friends
 * Wait, this is really weird. I swear that I haven't copied anything from this alternative Wikipedia, I've written it by myself. I remember the last time I checked this copy-violation it was less than 25%. What now? –UrbanJE (talk) 10:52, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry to interrupt, but it could be a mirror website or someone that copy-and-pasted the information from Wikipedia to that site. Aoba47 (talk) 16:42, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * If you see the edit history on the other wiki (here), a majority of the information was added on February 21, which supports that it was taken from Wikipedia. Aoba47 (talk) 16:45, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Outcome

 * This is my review! There are some things to fix, but I think you can bring it to GA soon... Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:30, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * All concerns have been addressed, thank you so much for spending your time reviewing the article. You're incredible –UrbanJE (talk) 12:36, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thing you said were done were indeed not. Please implement my comments or specify why you think they are not appropriate. Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:56, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey I'm sorry, I have addressed your concerns however someone reverted the editions in the lead, I've fixed yesterday but still there were some other points that I didn't perceive. Thanks for noticing me! –UrbanJE (talk) 13:38, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I have requested a copy-edit... Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:43, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Copy-edit completed, thank you so, so, so much for this request, it helped a lot. I actually didn't have time to post something about your request before, I'm sorry for this inactivity. I guess it sounded like I didn't care, but I do (dgmw haha). –UrbanJE (talk) 20:17, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:02, 3 March 2018 (UTC)