Talk:Real Groove/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
✅
 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
 * "Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
 * "and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
 * "attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
 * Pipe single to Single (music)
 * "A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
 * "with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
 * Add a comma after second studio album
 * "Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
 * "Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
 * Italicise Infinite Disco

Background and composition
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 * "Minogue was recording her own vocals" → "Minogue recorded her own vocals"
 * [6] needs to be at the end of the penultimate sentence from the Apple Music notes since that uses a quote
 * "doesn't know what's coming with it and it" → "does not know what is coming before it" to be less wordy
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on London per WP:OVERLINK
 * Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
 * Pipe strings to String instrument on the audio sample text
 * auto-tune → Auto-Tune on the text, with the wikilink
 * Pipe synths to Synthesizer
 * Pipe strings to String instrument
 * Pipe talk-box to Talk box
 * "Minogue uses auto-tuneed" → "Minogue uses Auto-Tuned" with the wikilink
 * "found again with Minogue" → "found again, with Minogue"
 * Remove wikilink on New York City
 * Wikilink tempo
 * Remove wikilink on electro-disco
 * Pipe chorus to Refrain
 * Remove wikilink on Tokyo

Release and promotion
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 * Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
 * "the day earlier." → "the previous day."
 * Italicise Infinite Disco
 * Where is the LED flooring sourced?
 * Removed. LOVI  33  04:31, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
 * Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
 * "Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"

✅
 * "by BBC Radio 2 on 24 December 2020 with" → "by the station on 24 December 2020, with"
 * "noting its "clean lines" → "noting the "clean lines" to avoid overusage of it
 * "on a remixed version" → "on an alternate version" since no remix is specified by the source
 * The source does not specify a digital download and streaming release, also shouldn't you stylize as "Studio 2054 Remix"?
 * Added source to back up. "remix" should be lowercase per MOS:MUSICCAPS. LOVI  33  19:01, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
 * "was released on 30 April 2021." → "was released on 30 April." to avoid overusage of the year

Critical reception

 * "compared it to that album." → "compared the song to the album."
 * "Gil Kaufman "silk shirt" → "Gil Kaufman observed "silk shirt"
 * Any idea which wiki Tony Manero should be piped to, if any?
 * Per Tony Manero it seems as though he is a character played by John Travolta in two films. Perhaps I pipe it to one of the films? LOVI  33  19:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
 * You should probably leave this actually; doing otherwise would be going against MOS:LINKSTYLE and the film is also unspecified. --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

✅
 * "Mike Wass of Idolator called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
 * "strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
 * "by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
 * "said it is" → "said the remix is"
 * "Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
 * "best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"

Commercial performance
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 * Pipe UK Singles Sales Chart to List of UK Singles Sales Chart number ones
 * "as an album chart." → "as an album track."
 * "that is an increase by" → "that marked an increase of"
 * "the following week becoming" → "the following week, becoming"
 * "on the chart." → "on the Hot Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
 * "16 in Hungary and 8" → "number 16 in Hungary and number 8"
 * New Zealand Hot Singles chart → New Zealand Hot Singles Chart with the wikilink

Track listings

 * Good

Personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed after this smooth review! --K. Peake 08:30, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review. All of the issues have been addressed. LOVI  33  19:15, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ once again to no surprise; I am consistently impressed with your hard work on these detailed articles! --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)