Talk:Really Love (KSI song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 15:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

 * It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
 * It contains copyright infringements -
 * It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include,, or large numbers of , , or similar tags. (See also ). -
 * It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

Lede

 * YouTuber needs a link. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * And for DJ. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * British Phonographic Industry (BPI), - these initials aren't used again in the lede. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

General

 * production duo Mojam. - might need to explain what Mojam is. Weird to say "duo", and then say one thing. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Anything linked and explained in the lede needs to also be linked and explained in the body, so links for KSI etc. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Being a UK garage track, KSI "thought it made sense" to ask British singer-songwriter Craig David to perform the chorus - is this quote necessary? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "We [sent the track] to Craig, hoping [that] he'd say yes. And he gave a resounding yes." - and this one. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * David recalled, "[KSI] reached out to me [and said], 'I've got this song that I think you'd be perfect on.' And I was like, 'Yeah, I'd be well up for it. Let me hear the song.' I heard it and I was like, 'Bro, this is a tune.' So I jumped on it that [same] night [and] vocalled it. I was going back and forth with [KSI], asking him, 'What [do you] think?' And he was so on it." - and this. Couldn't we just summarised by saying both men were on board with the draft? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The writing and production is almost exclusively quotes from both men being giddy about working on the project. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Really Love" is an uptempo UK garage and dance-pop track.[2][7][9][10] - WP:CITEKILL, do we need four cites to say this? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * On 7 October 2020, KSI revealed via Twitter that he would soon be releasing a new single.[12] Two days later, KSI announced via social media - Twitter is social media though... Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The last three sections don't have any prose, could we have something explaining what it was about? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

GA Review

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 15:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * It's been a while, any update on the above? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:01, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I just don't have the time right now to complete this review any time soon. It'll probably be in the next month. I don't mind if you fail the article for now.-- Timwikisidemen 07:42, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sure, sadly I'll have to fail this one, but the info above will remain. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:30, 30 March 2021 (UTC)