Talk:Rebel Heart Tour (album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:54, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * and songwriter Madonna. The album chronicles the singer's → Two clipped sentences that can be easily connected to "and songwriter Madonna, chronicling the singer's"
 * September 15, 2017, by → you don't need the second comma
 * and Eagle Records → ,and by Eagle Records
 * Rebel Heart Tour is Madonna's fifth live album and contains bonus content like → Rebel Heart Tour also contains bonus content including
 * In which year did Tears of a Clown occur?
 * 22 song → 22-song
 * Link "critics" to Music journalism
 * who noted Madonna's live singing → who picked Madonna's live vocals
 * in most of the nations → in most of the countries it charted in
 * and top-ten of the album charts → as well as the top ten of the album charts
 * won the category → won in the category

Infobox

 * All seems to be on point here ;)

Background

 * earning US$169.8 million, and was attended → earning US$169.8 million; it was attended (better wording here)
 * Entertainment Weekly announced → Entertainment Weekly subsequently announced (better flow)
 * it featured behind the scenes footage → it featured behind-the-scenes footage
 * of the tour.[5] Billboard showcased an exclusive behind-the-scenes look for the tour on December 2. → of the tour,[5] which had been exclusively previewed by Billboard on December 2, 2016.
 * as DVD, Blu-ray, and download → on DVD, Blu-ray and digital formats.
 * digital formats.[9] It is Madonna's fifth live album and contains bonus content like the Tears of a Clown show at Melbourne's Forum Theatre, as well as a 22 song double CD → digital formats,[9] containing bonus content including the Tears of a Clown show at Melbourne's Forum Theatre in YEAR, as well as a 22-song double CD. (the fact that it is her 5th live album is irrelevant in the article's body)
 * listed the total running time → listed the total running time of the album
 * 2 hours → two hours
 * The release was distributed → The release of Rebel Heart Tour was distributed
 * for pre-order from August 16, 2017 → for pre-order on August 16, 2017

Critical response

 * You need an overall sentence, such as "Upon its release, Rebel Heart Tour was met with generally positive reviews from music critics".
 * and felt that the release was a → describing the release as a
 * as well as fans who may have missed it, → this is completely irrelevant and should be removed
 * 4 stars out of 5 → please write out the numbers
 * saying that although Madonna's film career might not have been successful, "she knows → remove irelevant content about her unsuccessful film career and change into: saying that "[Madonna] knows
 * He further complimented the production, the video quality and combined with the audio, recommended it for being → He further complimented the production, the video and the audio quality of the album, recommending it for being
 * from Inquisitr gave positive review → from Inquisitr gave a positive review
 * gave positive review for the live album of the release but criticized the DVD and Blu-ray versions of the release for poor editing. He declared Rebel Heart Tour as Madonna's best live album to date and found it better than the DVD and Blu-ray. → gave a positive review for Rebel Heart Tour, calling it Madonna's best live album to date, but criticized the poor editing of its DVD and Blu-ray versions.
 * He complimented Madonna's live singing on the album and not using digital enhancement on her vocals → He also complimented Madonna's live, unprocessed vocals on the album.
 * during the dance-oriented performances → during dance sequences
 * from Attitude gave a positive review, describing the release → from Attitude commended the release, describing it
 * complimenting the dancers and Madonna's footwork onstage → complimenting the dancers, Madonna's footwork onstage

Commercial reception

 * I would rather rename the section into "Commercial performance", but it's your choice
 * You need an overall sentence here as well, such as "The album attained commercial success following its premiere."
 * It also reached number → The album also reached number (alternating words for better flow)
 * Year of release for Precious Memories: Live at the Ryman in brackets
 * number-one → number one
 * In France, the live album reached → use "peaked at" here for alternation
 * Link "SNEP Albums Chart" to "French Albums Chart"
 * copies while the video versions topped the French DVD → comma before "while"
 * certified the video Platinum → eventually certified... (for flow)
 * Across Europe the album → Across the rest of Europe, the album
 * top-ten of the charts → top ten of the charts
 * won the category → won in the category
 * Rename the section into "Commercial performance and accolades" because of the award

Track listing

 * Flawless ;)

Personnel

 * Credits adapted from Rebel Heart Tour liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rebel Heart Tour
 * Unlink "Madonna"

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Certifications

 * Flawless ;)

Release history

 * Flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 38.7% is still acceptable!

Outcome
Hi there! This article requires a bit of work, but it could easily be brought to GA status. I have put it for 7 days to allow you work on the article in concordance with my comments above. Best regards and good luck; Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:00, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all comments, except the summary line that you had asked for in the beginning of the critical/commercial sections. Reason being since I could not find a source calling the album as "successful" or "received positive reviews", it did not feel correct to have a POV pushing statement. — IB [ Poke ] 11:19, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:24, 3 April 2018 (UTC)