Talk:Reckitt/Archives/2014

Advert - too much CSR detail, also unbalanced in other areas
In the context of a the business the CSR coverage is overblown -each of the sub-sections     6.1 Save the Children,     6.2 Carbon 20 ,     6.3 betterbusiness ,     6.4 RB Trees should merit a single sentence not several paragraphs.

Other areas are unbalanced - eg "operations" - One sentence of less than 20 worlds covers the company's entire manufacturing, research, marketting and backoffice research facilities. The graduate recruitment program gets an entire paragraph.

Section is also advertising copy. is too verbose - it doesn't need to be 6 paragraphs.

Prof.Haddock (talk) 05:20, 12 July 2014 (UTC)