Talk:Recovery (Eminem album)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 20 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Production for the album took → Production of the album took
 * Link music critics
 * criticized its consistency → What do you mean by this? I thought have though consistency was a good thing.
 * released on April 29, 2010 → Need a comma after 2010
 * Why is the 100 in italics? It's called the Billboard Hot 100
 * With the sales → With sales
 * of all time. → to date
 * also debuted on the → also charted on the


 * Background and production
 * When premiering his debut single, "Not Afraid" Eminem → Need a comma after "Not Afraid"
 * from the album. and bombasted → What's the full stop there for? Also I don't know what bombasted means, so probably best to use a different word.


 * Themes and composition
 * in an interview with Billboard → You need a comma after Billboard, otherwise the clause just doesn't make sense
 * which features Black Sabbath's Changes → What does this mean? How can one song feature someone elses album?


 * Release and promotion
 * on March 5, 2010 → Again, you need a comma after 2010. Check this from henceforth please.
 * eleased on June 21 in the United States and the United Kingdom, and on June 18 in the rest of Europe → SHouldn't Europe come first as it was released first? Not very consistent to say the 21 then 18


 * Weekly charts
 * Chart column should have the shading per WP:ACCESS


 * Year-end charts
 * Different yearly peaks should be in separate tables, not all joined as one.


 * Chart succession
 * This should be removed, it is completely redundant now and carries no significance. There are lists dedicated to this now.


 * Certifications
 * Something is wrong with the GCG Middle East one, just a big red code.


 * References
 * FN1: MTV News should be linked and not in italics. The publisher is Viacom. Where is the access date??
 * FN3: No publisher or access date
 * FN8: No access date
 * FN9: No access date
 * FN11: Rap-Up needs linking, the publisher is Devin Lazerine.
 * FN13: MTV sources has no publisher
 * FN20: Rolling Stone source has no publisher. Neither does 21, 22, or 23
 * FN24: MTV should not be italics. Publisher is Viacom. Also an unknown parameter resulting in a red link.
 * FN25: Idolator and Buzz Media both need linking
 * I'm on number 25, and so far 12 have inaccuracies. There are 213 references. I'm not going to go through another 185 approx for all your mistakes. MTV, iTunes should not be in italics. MTV publisher is Viacom. References need publishers and access dates. I can see from further ones down the bottom that Billboard should be in italics and the publisher, Prometheus Global Media, should be added.
 * Wow, loads of dead links in this article. They need to be removed, and preferably replaced

Sorry but I'm failing this. The references are a mess and there are basic grammatical errors throughout the article. I suggest that you put this up for a peer review and get an experienced editor to go through your references. Some parts are just plain unclear. — AARON  &bull; TALK   18:15, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
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