Talk:Red (Taylor Swift album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The short description should go at the top of the article.
 * The cover's non-free use rationale looks good.
 * Add a serial comma between "pop, country and rock".
 * Add a serial comma between "Britrock, dance-pop and dubstep".
 * "reworked on the album" "reworked the album"
 * "dubious on the genre" "dubious about the genre"
 * Add a serial comma between "dance-pop, dubstep and Britrock".
 * Remove the comma after "Swift's perspectives".
 * Remove the comma after "optimism".
 * Add a serial comma between "country, folk and soft rock" (both times).
 * "climatic finale" - typo?
 * "On the song, Swift sings" "In the song, Swift sings"
 * "a relationship that is dangerous" "a dangerous relationship"
 * Remove the comma after "fear of aging".
 * "On "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces" "In "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces"
 * "from third-person perspective" "from a third-person perspective"
 * "on digital and physical formats" "in digital and physical formats"
 * Add a serial comma between "Keds, Wal-Mart and Papa John's".
 * "review published 2019" "review published in 2019"
 * Remove the comma after 69 Love Songs.
 * Remove the comma after "sales of 2012".
 * Add a hyphen between "pop inspired".
 * "groundwork to the" "groundwork for the"
 * Remove the comma after "re-recording of Red"
 * "counter measure" should be written as one word.
 * Remove the comma after "purchase of the label".
 * The second #Release_history only has one release so I would remove it.
 * References
 * Check for WP:ALLCAPS (#152, #156, #221), WP:QWQ, and WP:CURLY.
 * Wikilink Brian Mansfield, Chuck Klosterman, and Steven Hyden.
 * New York Magazine and New York Vulture
 * You just mean to change the display name (leave wikilink), correct? -- The SandDoctor Talk 05:38, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I would change the link to Vulture Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The reference after "in September" is missing a website.
 * Mark sources from GQ with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark sources from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark sources from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark sources from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark sources from Time with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark sources from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for this review. Save for one question and needing to double check QWQ and CURLY, all points are completed. -- The SandDoctor Talk 05:38, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I think I have ALLCAPS and QWQ just fine, but how do I search for curly quotes? Whenever I try copying and pasting, CTRL + F just shows all quotes on the page, which isn't extraordinarily helpful. Is there a script or something that you are aware of? -- The SandDoctor Talk 18:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for explaining how you did it in your summary. I'll keep that in mind for future! . Thank you for reviewing this, ! -- The SandDoctor Talk 00:39, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * I am curious: how far off do you think this one is from FA? I'll probably open a peer review in the next couple of days or so with that in mind. -- The SandDoctor Talk 00:42, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Not that far. I would support for FA if nominated. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC)