Talk:Red Carpet (Namie Amuro song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 15:41, 5 December 2016 (UTC)

Review arriving soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:41, 5 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Point, as the singer's third → Remove comma
 * single; along with it came the B-side → single, being supported by B-side
 * It was distributed → "Red Carpet" was distributed (word rep.)
 * and for digital → and was made available for digital
 * digital consumption → link to music download
 * drums through its instrumentation → drums as instrumentation
 * it focuses → you have already used "it" before; alternate
 * reviews from music critics. Majority of the reviews commended → reviews from music critics, with them commending
 * highlighted → highlighting
 * was used as the commercial track to a campaign → was used for a campaign
 * and included → and was included
 * Japan, and additionally throughout Asia. → Japan and Asia.

Infobox

 * CD and digital artwork. → Artwork used to physically and digitally commercialize the single (no full stop)

Background and release

 * music video; she also added → music video, and unveiled
 * the B-side track → its B-side track
 * having released "Tsuki" (January 2014) and "Brighter Day" (November 2014) → having made available for purchase "Tsuki" (2014) and "Brighter Day" (2014)
 * was used as the theme song to Japanese anime series → served as the opening theme for Japanese anime series
 * whom previously → who previously
 * and noted instrumentation of guitars → and described its instrumentation as consisting of guitars
 * reporting from Land of Rising → writing for Land of Rising
 * composition as a → composition a
 * link "pop" to respective article on Wiki
 * Add release year in brackets to the two linked singles
 * Lyrically, it focuses → Do you mean "Red Carpet" here or "Black Make-Up"? If yes, then insert the title instead of "it"
 * narcissism; subsequently, the line → narcissism, with the line,
 * was described → being described
 * the sound as an "upbeat neo soul tune" → the sound as "upbeat neo soul".

Release

 * Please attach this section to the previous one
 * Dimension Point, as the singer's → remove comma
 * and for digital → and was made available for
 * with two videos (the official music visual and the making of video) → with the single's official music video and behind-the-scenes footage
 * red silk fabric, resembling the aesthetic of a red carpet; she is wearing the → red silk fabric, which resembles the aesthetic of a red carpet, wearing the
 * The physical formats included → Physical releases of "Red Carpet"

Reception

 * the composition production → the recording's production
 * 'breaking any boundary or reaching outstanding levels..." → "breaking any boundary or reaching outstanding levels [...]"
 * appeal; the review also highlighted → appeal, additionally highlighting
 * the songs production and composition → the production and composition of "Red Carpet"
 * esque content → esque vibe (word rep.)
 * it debuted at number two on Oricon's weekly chart → it opened Oricon's weekly chart at number two
 * copies, marking it the → copies and marking the
 * first week → first-week
 * Add year of release to other linked singles here
 * highest charting → highest-charting
 * after her triple → behind her triple
 * units and marked its final week → units in its final week
 * all hosted by → all published

Promotion

 * on the singer's → onto the singer's
 * sits down briefly → what is this supposed to mean?
 * public out including → public, including
 * walking about a flight of stairs → this is poor grammar and I don't get what you want to say.
 * used on Japanese → used for Japanese
 * as the commercial track → as the opening theme
 * theme song to Japanese → theme song for Japanese
 * in Japan, and additionally throughout Asia → in Japan and Asia

Credits and personnel

 * flawless ;)

Charts

 * You don't need two separate columns; render them together with the subtitle "Weekly charts"

Sales

 * You don't need a separate section for the sales; please add it as a subsection to "Charts and sales"

Release history

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 2.9% is perfect!

Images and others

 * Article is perfectly illustrated by cover artwork.

Links

 * No problems here!