Talk:Redeployment (short story collection)

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the intro needs grammar improvement (specifically the 2nd sentence) and it needs to be longer AnabelTelles (talk) 01:54, 27 September 2016 (UTC)Anabel Telles

this article has too many long quotes AnabelTelles (talk) 02:00, 27 September 2016 (UTC)