Talk:Redgrave and Lopham Fens

Article review response
Back in January I asked for a review of the article to gain sugestions on how to improve it. As follows is the response I received on my talk page:

'' Hi. This is a copy of the request you had for comments on this article. I'll just add that I'd prefer the photos were slightly larger in the article, and also, if possible, that there is a photo demonstrating the damage the Trust seeks to fix. That said, adding photographs to Wiki involves a complicated copyright procedure: Essentially, the easiest way is to take a picture yourself, then give it away to the public domain. I can help with that.


 * ''What you added is interesting and well-written. My concern that you might be using Wikipedia to further a political agenda, however, was strengthened by your heavy use of www.suffolkwildlife.com as a reference. This leaves the material open to getting an WP:NPOV tag, or perhaps even being deleted entirely by someone who disagrees. Since being neutral is one of Wikipedia's three core content polities, it would be better to recast some of your language slightly so that it is clear that the text is expressing a particular (perhaps very common) point-of-view.


 * ''This sentence is a example of *beginning* to depart from Wiki guidelines: "In 1961 the Suffolk Wildlife Trust gained control of the site but limited resources meant the large scale work required couldn't be carried out." If I was a detractor of the Trust, I'd question what "limited resources" meant, and especially what "large scale work required" meant. Required to accomplish what goal? Is there any upper limit for how much money the Trust would be willing to spend? Do all the locals agree about the goals?


 * Again, just a little more caution would be appropriate. Overall, yours seems like a very worthwhile contribution. Regards, Piano non troppo (talk) 09:30, 13 January 2009 (UTC) 

I have since increased the size of pictures as sugested and carried out a brief rewrite of sections to help improve NPOV but I am still looking for further 3rd party sources to replace SWT references. -HelioSmith (talk) 19:14, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

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