Talk:Reed Timmer/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 18:07, 3 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Reconrabbit (talk · contribs) 17:14, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Hi. I'm taking on this review. Recon rabbit  17:14, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing this GAN, ! I appreciate it, and I'm pretty sure I've resolved all your concerns below. :) ~ Tails   Wx  01:03, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Want to let you know that I did read your changes to the article, but there might be some delay in finishing the review. I've been pretty sick the past few days. Recon  rabbit  02:55, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Alright, sounds good. Wishing you a speedy recovery! ~ Tails   Wx  12:32, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @Tails Wx I'm a bit better now. Some more notes. Recon  rabbit  14:41, 18 July 2024 (UTC)

Prose notes

 * "Tornado warned-storm" or "tornado-warned storm"?
 * Yeah, it's "tornado-warned storm". ~ Tails   Wx  01:02, 13 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Under 2019-present, the phrase "a Dominator 3" is used. Are there multiple Dominator 3s?
 * Nope, there's just one! Replaced "a" with "the". ~ Tails   Wx  01:02, 13 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Running into some WP:PROSELINE writing under the storm chasing career, but the paragraphs are large enough for it to not make a major impact.

Broadness

 * A pretty clear timeline of the notable events in Reed's life, but lacks cohesion. I can see that being a consequence of the type of references used that are all "top 5 closest calls" etc.
 * What did he do on Storm Chasers in 2007 (-2008?)? Did he do anything notable in 2014?

Focus

 * Goes into detail on major events without repeating articles verbatim. ✅
 * Some concerns about due weight on his personal life, specifically his siblings' names and parents' divorce.
 * I did remove his siblings' names, but kept the info on his parents' divorce because it seemed...notable, in my opinion. ~ Tails   Wx  01:02, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Neutrality

 * No ongoing or recent edit wars.

Copyright violations

 * None found, all sources in English so no concern of translated copied material, other language Wikipedia articles have little to no overlap. ✅

Original research

 * All statements backed up by references. ✅

Images

 * Images currently in the article are tagged with attribution and licenses. ✅
 * There was a photo of Reed Timmer in the article before but it was deleted. Out of scope here but keep that in mind.

Misc. notes
I split his secondary education into two sentences since I felt it was too long compared to the rest of the article. Also, it was sitting on its own there. Recon rabbit  14:41, 18 July 2024 (UTC)