Talk:Refugee controversy in Sjöbo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lord Roem (talk) 23:58, 28 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I look forward to reviewing this article as part of a GAN-clean out campaign ;) - Lord Roem (talk) 23:58, 28 February 2011 (UTC)
 * On a first look - no problems with external links or disambugation pages. :) Lord Roem (talk) 00:03, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

Specific notes/comments
Lead
 * Confused about the little message on the top about the O. Explain please?
 * "it was initiated" --> "it was triggered when Sven-Olle Olsson...."
 * The long quote about Olsson seems out of place. Also this sentence forgets the actual issue. What does it mean by 'refugee controversy'?
 * What made it end in 2001? Make this "lasted in Sjobo until 2001, when the city let refugees in for the first time in a decade." or something like that.

Background
 * Bio on Olsson? Not needed. This isn't about him.
 * Where did the motion go before? A council? Its unclear here.
 * Need a cite for "an idea Olsson disliked"
 * Sentence on his fame also seems unclear/unneeded.
 * Why does it matter that it was hailed by Nazi groups? Seems a bit POV-y here.

Referendum
 * Period at the end of the image's caption here.
 * Incorporate the AP quote in. Don't just say: "X said this: ..."
 * Does Ramel have a last name?
 * Very long quote from Phili Inquirer. Maybe use some of it throughout this section?

Result
 * "Fears" --> "concerns" or "feelings" (make it a more neutral term)
 * Last paragraph here starts with verb agreement issue. "said that...she believes..."

Aftermath
 * What led to the overturning of the decision?
 * Why mention Olsson died in 2005? This is not an article about him.

References/External Links/Images/Other
 * Youtube link? #6 doesn't go anywhere.

Final Thoughts
Work to be done, but doable for promotion if improved. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 01:06, 1 March 2011 (UTC)