Talk:Regine Tugade/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this, will post review soon. Kosack (talk) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

 * The Dededo, Guam link is a redirect, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked per WP:OVERLINK.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Is the update field needed? There's no competition statistics included so I'm not sure it is.
 * Well, it says that as of that date, she has no medals. I will update it since she still does not.  Kees08  (Talk)  

Lead

 * Is female necessary? Looking at a number of other female athletes, this doesn't seem to be required.
 * Okay, removed. I think sometimes it is added if the name is not a common one, but Regine is clear enough.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * I think the opening sentence could do with rewording, "is a Guamanian sprinter" instead of "sprinter from Guam" would be more consistent with this style of page.
 * I think maybe it was like that so we did not have two links in a row, but Guamanian does flow better.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link Beijing and Cali.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "She competed in the 2016 Summer Olympics of the women's 100 metres preliminary round", this sentence is a bit muddled. Swap it round so the event comes first, "She competed in the women's 100 metres preliminary round at the 2016 Summer Olympics".
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * After the use in the second sentence, metres can simply be referred to as m. Change the Olympics event to women's 100 m instead of metres to maintain consistency.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * The opening mentions she competed in the 100m at the 2017 World Championships but the later section states it was the 200m?
 * Corrected  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Refs 2 and 3 need to be placed after punctuation.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Biography

 * Again, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link most valuable player.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * naval academy > United States Naval Academy
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

World Championships

 * Change Beijing, China link to just Beijing, leaving China unlinked.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * '"She also competed in the 2017 World Championships. She competed", bit of repetition there. Perhaps, "She also competed in the 200 m at the 2017 World Championships, finishing sixth in..."?
 * Changed competed to ran  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Refs 15 and 16 have an unnecessary space between them.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

College career

 * Link 2016 Summer Olympics.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Add "in Rio de Janeiro" after that.
 * Added a sentence so I could do this, since you cannot do it in section headers.  Kees08  (Talk)  

2016 Summer Olympics

 * Ref 7 states she was one of just five athletes that were chosen to represent Guam, perhaps mention this?
 * Added  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link 2020 Summer Olympics.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)