Talk:Regine at the Theater/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grk1011 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this for you! Grk1011 (talk) 15:47, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Comments as outlined below. Table updated as issues are addressed.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox is good overall, including non-free rationale for the image.
 * For the two instances of "November 27", did you mean November 21? That's what the poster and shows table list for the last show.
 * That's my bad, it is Nov 21. Fixed


 * Add "Philippines" after Parañaque.
 * Added


 * The lead could use a slight rewrite for flow. There are at least two short sentences that stand out due to the length of the other sentences surrounding them.
 * Revised.

Background and development

 * Change to "would perform" and "that November"
 * Done


 * Ref 1 is an article on the GMA website about her announcing the shows through the social media posts, but I don't see how that also translates to her announcing it through GMA Network News. Aren't they just reporting the news?
 * Revised


 * fix ", with a show title called Regine at the Theater."
 * Not sure what you meant to fix on this, but if it's adding Philippines after Paranaque, I've done so too.


 * Add something to introduce PLDT like "telecommunications company PLDT"
 * Added


 * Ref 2 from PLDT has some interesting promotional aspects of the partnership which aren't mentioned
 * I don't think it'll add value to include giving away free or complimentary tickets or etc, from sponsors. Concert/Tours generally do not incorporate such.


 * "songs she will perform" -> change "will" to would.
 * Done


 * "...production, while Audie Gemora,..." would it make sense to add singers or performers after "while"?
 * Done


 * Ref 9. Could you elaborate on this a bit? I'm not sure that mentioning it aired with an unverifiable ref like this would work. There is likely some article or at least a specific date out there.
 * Unfortunately, sourcing or citations within the Philippines are a bit of a challenge, even for recent ones. I've made this approach to another GA of her concert (Twenty (concert) as well.


 * I couldn't find the "two years earlier" in refs 4 or 5.
 * It's mentioned in ref 5: This concert series (which was conceptualized two years ago)


 * Quote checks out. Clever way of using it while avoiding the Tagalog that was sprinkled into the original.

Synopsis and reception

 * change to a piano?
 * Done


 * "alternately mashed" <- I'm not sure what this means
 * I've linked to Mashup (music) to provide context


 * Change "the next act" to "the second act". I'd also recommend opening this section with the fact that it was a two act show. You mention it in the lead, but don't say that elsewhere.
 * Done


 * Bunoan quote checks out in ref 10
 * What about the special guests? When did they perform?
 * Gemora appeared in all shows, Santos and Viray alternated in both weekends. Added note in the "Shows" section

Set list

 * If the set list varied a little bit, I think that needs to be mentioned in the synopsis as well.
 * Added

Shows

 * All good here

Other GA criteria

 * Images good
 * Ref spot checks listed above
 * Earwigs copyvio at 37% (unlikely vio), but it just flagged properly-attributed quotes.

Discussion
Hi this looks good. Only minor issues to take a look at. Grk1011 (talk) 14:54, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking up this review Grk1011. I have addressed your comments and provided my response. LEt me know if there's anything I may have missed. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:23, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Happy to pass this now. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 26 August 2023 (UTC)