Talk:Reid Detmers/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * Citation 22 is missing an author although it is applicable
 * Fixed. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * No edit wars, only 2 reverts, one by an ip vandal, the other was someone who undid their own edit
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * I have just a few suggestions that I am going to list here to improve the article
 * In the early life section, the source provided doesn't give the name of Detmers' mother
 * Added source with mother's name. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Could we get stats provided for the cape cod season
 * Added stats. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
 * Added subheadings to major league section. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
 * Updated prose to reflect 2023 season. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
 * As far as I can tell, no such navbox protocol exists, only for no-hitter pitchers. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, only 2 reverts, one by an ip vandal, the other was someone who undid their own edit
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * I have just a few suggestions that I am going to list here to improve the article
 * In the early life section, the source provided doesn't give the name of Detmers' mother
 * Added source with mother's name. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Could we get stats provided for the cape cod season
 * Added stats. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
 * Added subheadings to major league section. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
 * Updated prose to reflect 2023 season. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
 * As far as I can tell, no such navbox protocol exists, only for no-hitter pitchers. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
 * Added subheadings to major league section. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
 * Updated prose to reflect 2023 season. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
 * As far as I can tell, no such navbox protocol exists, only for no-hitter pitchers. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

@, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if there are any other concerns. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)